A shell, its two halves
Still joined,
Lies open on the sand
Barely covered by
The shallow waters
Of the lagoon.
A single raindrop
Pierces the sea
And lands on one half
Of the shell.
Blessed with new life,
It rises to ruffle the surface
Of the still backwater.
Rings form.
They multiply and spread
The essence of the shell
As they interact
With the circular patterns
Of nearby droplets.
The pulsating spheres
Touch, embrace
And partially cover
But do not obliterate
The inimitability
Of the second shell.
Two separate entities
Each with its own,
Yet shared, life story
Rejoice in their common bond
Revel in their individuality.
(Inspired by “Shells“, Friday Fictioneers, madison-woods.com, August 10, 2012.)
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Nicely done.
Thanks! I loved your Venus wandering back to her shell–shows even she can make mistakes when playing the matchmaking game.
Beautifully written.
Thanks so much for your comment–I read your story, and if it’s based on truth, it must have been a frightening experience.
Touches on one of my favorite themes–individuality/connection. Nice perspective on the prompt.
Thanks–I thought your approach in “Contact” to touch but don’t take was very interesting.
I really liked the way you described the expanding rings as the “essence” of the shell’s form being spread through the water. Nice work, and a great way to tackle the prompt!
Many thanks! I enjoyed your “Reunion” as well.
Beautiful poem. I like how the halves are together, yet separate. Thanks for your comments on mine.
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Thanks for your nice comment–I got a chuckle when I read about Dumbo’s ears.
Thanks for stopping by my story. I loved the images your poem evoked. Beautiful.
Thanks–always nice to know my words are well received.
Well done! Nice blend of sight and emotion. Thanks for commenting on mine.
Thanks for the nice compliment. I enjoyed reading your posts as well.
gorgeous!!
& thanks for stopping by..
You’re welcome and thanks for following me. I enjoyed reading some of your posts and seeing your beautiful photographs
Beautiful poem. Thanks for visiting & commenting on mine.
You’re welcome. Enjoyed your post re: Shells (and the fishing angle–bit of a double-entendre there).
Like two loves or friends.. beautifully written:)
This has so many layers to it. I keep seeing more. Among other things, it speaks to me about the spirit, as well as an individual being a tiny part of a whole – just like the human race.