“The Rain Comes Down” (A Rondelet)

The rain comes down
And brings new life to my garden.
The rain comes down
And sweetens the air of my town.
Its drops inspire many men
And spawn magic worlds for children.
The rain comes down.

(Written for dVersePoets, “Form for All—The Rondelet”. June 13, 2013.)

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15 Responses to “The Rain Comes Down” (A Rondelet)

  1. brian miller says:

    cool…the happy side of rain…the good it does…and hey i dont mind jumping in the puddles myself…nicely done to form…

  2. Grace says:

    The rain is magical and brings new life to the garden ~ Lovely work on the refrain and rhyming pattern too ~

  3. Eric Alagan says:

    Rain – or rather, water – life as we know it.

  4. Marya says:

    … and the grass gets taller and taller.
    Nicely done.

  5. Well in Miami the rain brings moskeeters the size of Buicks

  6. Mary says:

    This has a rhythmic and peaceful feel. The message works well with this form, as the repetition intensifies the rhythm of the rain.

  7. Rowan Taw says:

    Great rhythm and lovely use of the form.

  8. Tony Maude says:

    The repetition works really well here; it is somehow redolent of falling rain. Rain is fine – as long as it stops sometime. Thanks for joining in at dVerse, today.

  9. I really like this as it brings up the summer rain… and just as Tony says the pitter-patter of rain is really great with repetitions. 🙂

  10. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    Nicely done. I like the inclusion of the children.

  11. claudia says:

    love me a warm summer rain…it has power to make us smile…and write…smiles

  12. janehewey says:

    reading your rondelet, I realize what a beautiful circle this form creates. i love rain and this is a lovely poem.

  13. nessa1313 says:

    Splish, splash, lots of fun.

  14. Kelvin S.M. says:

    …playful imagery of something so true… you had fun with the form… i can see & feel… loved it… smiles…

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